IELTS essays can be on a variety of topics, and this writing sample is about reducing crime.
There are two opinions, and you must discuss each one and your opinion must also be given.
In this essay, the writers opinion was given a separate body paragraph discusses the writers opinion.
If you do this thought you have to be very careful not to just repeat what you have said in a previous paragraph into the third paragraph.
It has to be something new.
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